Member Story
"Don't you wish the world was made out of candy?" said Rana at her friends house.
"Well, then the water you drank would be candy-tasted," said Aya.
At Aya's house, Rana went to sleep. In the morning, there was candy all over the place.
"Wow, let's go eat the flowers outside," said Rana.
Soon they realized that they were candy.
"Let's go have some water. I am so thirsty," said Rana.
Then water didn't taste like water. It was candy-tasted. Then Rana wanted it to be a normal life again. So they went to sleep. In the morning...
"Is everything candy still?" Rana asked Aya, rubbing her eyes.
"Look, Rana, it's not candy anymore," said Aya.
"YAY! Now I am going to drink some water," said Rana.
The End!
I like candy too and huda your story is way too short. You are just trying to get easy points
ReplyDeleteNo I am not and it isnt too short.
ReplyDeleteThe story looks bigger cause i think u double spaced it. This is how to story would look without spacing:"Don't you wish the world was made out of candy?" said Rana at her friends house.
ReplyDeleteWell, then the water you drank would be candy-tasted," said Aya.
At Aya's house, Rana went to sleep. In the morning, there was candy all over the place.
"Wow, let's go eat the flowers outside," said Rana.
Soon they realized that they were candy.
"Let's go have some water. I am so thirsty," said Rana.
Then water didn't taste like water. It was candy-tasted. Then Rana wanted it to be a normal life again. So they went to sleep. In the morning...
"Is everything candy still?" Rana asked Aya, rubbing her eyes.
"Look, Rana, it's not candy anymore," said Aya.
"YAY! Now I am going to drink some water," said Rana.
The End!
Abi, you wastedyour time on doing that?
DeleteNo he didn't
DeleteThe story isnt too short though since other members have been making shorter ones.
ReplyDeletegreat story huda.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Zeynep.
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